Hypothermia, a Poem
You started as a shape in the snow.
Not dead, but like
one pretending to be dead,
body temperature dangerously low,
mind in a torpor. I stripped you
to your underwear. I undressed, and crawled into
the sleeping bag with you,
and looked at the sky through hardwoods
bare of leaves.
I told you how nice it is when
the wind sends tremors through the tops
of the trees and underneath it's still.
I did not voice
my regret that the shape in the snow
was only you and not a new me.
Slowly, you began
to warm. I said, "Come to consciousness."
You whispered, "Are you my poem?"
I answered, "No, I am only a story."
12 comments:
Beautiful poem! Thank you for posting it.
Have a nice weekend! :-)
oh, i love this. the ending is the beginning...
Puts things about writing that are almost indescribable into words....
thanks for posting it!
Wow...That's very cool. Thanks for sharing. :)
Lovely. And, as Patti said, the story becomes the poem.
I love it!
Very nice. I like this.
Holy Muse, Batman! This is superior. Every line is faultless. More than a gem!
Lisa - big army garrison in Colchester ... that ring any bells?
very nice !
right on, lee-press-on
Love it. K.
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